I love you
As high as the sky
Will go forever,
He promised.
But the sky fell,
Leaving me to pick
Up the scattered
Heart-clouds.
Jen's Rambling Thoughts…
My Little Corner Of The Universe
I love you
As high as the sky
Will go forever,
He promised.
But the sky fell,
Leaving me to pick
Up the scattered
Heart-clouds.
Jen's Rambling Thoughts... 
You say so much in few words. Very good.
Love is one huge hyperbole. Nicely done.
short and powerful……maybe my best read today…….thanks for sharing your words
I like this, and within a few short lines the metaphor is executed well.
-Nicole
this poem fell right into place. The statement it makes applies to anyone. a Universal poem. A evergreen.
This is very good. Your portrayed such depth of emotion in a few short words.